Pie Fountain

Hello! Sorry for the late post, I’m not feeling too ‘OK’ right now. I’m not sick or anything, just… maybe this extended summer is making me lose my mood or something…

 

Jam Mart Clothing


I always thought that this hair looks like Wolverine:

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MR. COOL HAIR IS LEAVING! You think you’re too cool for Jamaa, huh? Huh?

 

Jam Mart Furniture


Do you like pie? Well, this table full of pie is leaving!

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Treetop Gardens


HELLO, WHY ARE YOU HERE?
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How odd. Regardless, I’ve always liked this item!

 

Videos


Head over to Tierney’s Theatre and watch this video:
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Well, again, I’m partially rushing so I didn’t watch it.

Anyway, in the Sarepia Theatre and catch this leaving clip:
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Miscellaneous


I decided to read the comic book today.
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Have you all read it? Well I’m placing my screenshots below. Sadly, you can’t use the magnifying glass.
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I like how the coloured it, but I’m not too fond of the story line. At least it wasn’t that Peck’s food was poisonous and that the phantoms were vanquished due to that. I was fearful it turned out to be that way. Luckily, it didn’t.

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Seeing the cameo, I searched the background and then saw the bulletin board. Jamaa Township, huh. Why is there a patch of grass there now? Why are they no Jammers clamouring about them? Did they go to a deserted server? With those two random animals, I doubt that. Since if they’d see the Alphas… won’t they notify everyone? Why aren’t they having a banquet in the Sky Hall or something? Greely’s Hideout? Peck’s Burrow? Cosmo’s Den? Sir Gilbert’s Palace?

Next thing I noticed was Lisa’s eyes.
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Her eyes seem to be drawn with a brush that isn’t ‘full’, leaving white specks around her eyes. Not cool.

Next is Cosmo’s and the koala’s skinny arm.
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It looks so odd. No offense, they look like bananas. Searching up koala pictures… those banana hands look all the weirder.
Also, THAT SPOON. How did it function?
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Lastly, Greely’s sense of humour seems light here. It’s not as what I have thought.

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HELLO, GREELY. I thought you were an expert at this. Why don’t you slowly step away from the Phantoms and keep your distance?

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So overall while it’s an OK comic with an OK story line… the Alphas seem to have… changed, don’t they. Or maybe I’ve delved into the personalities of the Alphas in my stories too much I’ve thought otherwise.

Mostly me doing silly criticism hha… sorry…



 

Alright, jammers! I need to go off now. See you all!

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2 comments on “Pie Fountain

  1. Cutepups says:

    Ooh, AJ has comics now? That’s cool. This one was pretty silly (Peck’s terrible egg salad saved the day, huh? xD). Haha, nice criticism you got going on.

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